Destruction Of Heavens

It's a good example of how to develop a system novel. The writer did a good job with opening and throughing the mc right into the action but also adding meaning to it. The way the world was explained was logical and made sense, and it wasn't overwhelming it was simple and to the point. Great story overall and ill be adding it to my library's

Wow, this is fantastic, just the opening and I'm already hooked, always waiting for updates. well done author

            Floating around space without a spacesuit is so deadly, even if you are a magician. The radiation that the sun emits is harmful, and if you try to breathe in space, your lungs will collapse because there is no air and air pressure. Yet, the man does not breathe at all, and he is ignoring the radiation.

My hobbies and sports are playing Football Not American Football, Archery, rocking climbing, Zip wiring, taking to my friends and family, Football, making people laugh, writing novels, Watching WWE on YouTube, listen to music, eating health Foods and going to college/church.

"Tomas, keadaan gadis ini kritis, kalau dibiarkan di sini nyawanya bisa tidak tertolong.." ujar letnan itu.

They kept talking about they are going to do today, and what they have done yesterday, one topic lead to another, just like yesterday's dinner.

Where was I? Oh right, recruiting this guy.

Chapter 12: Vacation